Tuesday, November 18, 2014

Cold Haiku






unemotional

volcanic gazes frozen

hearts broken, love lost




Inspired by the prompt at









36 comments:

  1. Need a torch to melt the ice away

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    1. Pat, to be honest when it comes to some people who shall remain nameless it would take a blow torch to melt the ice around my heart. But then, they really deserve it. Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments. So pleased you liked my haiku! ♥

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    2. Jeyanthi, maybe not but literal and it made me smirk a bit. LOL Thank you for your comments! ♥

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  2. oh! That was perfect! :)

    (I haven't been receiving any notifications from your blog! :( )

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    1. Pixie, I am so pleased you liked it! There is probably not a thing wrong with your feed, I just haven't wrote much in a long while. Now that I finally have some desire and my mojo seems to be somewhat back...hopefully you will see more posts from me! ♥ Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  3. Hope that never happens here!

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    1. JoJo, for your sake I hope it doesn't either! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  4. You have such a knack for the unusual

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    1. Carol, I am so pleased you liked it! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  5. Captured the whole essence...so ordinary and commonplace but only you could have put this up so nicely in just a few words...

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    1. Nabanita, I am so pleased you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  6. "volcanic gazes frozen" - wow! that's a powerful line.

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    1. Judith, I am so happy you liked it!! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! I appreciate them so much! ♥

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  7. great haiku on cold Kathy... and isn't it that this type of cold is the worst in the world ? Only unconditional love can melt this frozen heart .... moved by it .. you have created a vivid image in so few words! Congrats for that :)

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    1. Kokila, I am so pleased you liked it! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  8. Hugs, Kathy! See? You did it again! Skilfully woven haiku!

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    1. Vidya, yes...haiku seems to come easy most times. I am SO happy you liked it and I feel so blessed with your praise. Thank you so much for stopping by, for your hugs, and for your comments! They mean so much to me!

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  9. Frozen hearts....the end of love....devastating !

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    1. rallentanda, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  10. Lost ?? Then let me help to find :P

    I like your blog :) Its beautiful.. :)

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    1. Jeyanthi, I am so pleased you enjoyed my haiku and my blog. Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  11. Great Haiku. The worst kind of cold. I agree with Kokila, only unconditional love can melt such a frozen heart.

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    1. Kiran, I agree! I am so pleased you enjoyed my haiku. Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  12. Kathy this is superb!! None can match you in Haiku writing.

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    1. Usha, I am so happy you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  13. Oh! It would take a lot a love to 'unfreeze' this heart!

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    1. Shilpa, it sure would! Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  14. Beautiful...always in awe of your haikus Kathy!

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    1. Sanch, I am thrilled you liked it! Thanks so much for stopping in and for your sweet comments! ♥

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    1. oneofaclass, I am so pleased you liked it! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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    1. Alice, I am so pleased you liked it!! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  17. I like the romantic spin you've put on "cold".

    Yay! Victory. I've been trying on and off for days to find a way to get a comment from wordpress to blogger. This capacity seems to be intermittant and vanishing between the two platforms. So I opened an ancient and unused blogger account. But, alas, it doesn't link to my blog.

    https://alicekeysmd.wordpress.com/2014/11/22/cold-honey/

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    1. Alice, well that is annoying for you. Still it really does work to add your link. Thanks so much for adding your link so I can visit you too.

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