This is a fictional piece I wrote for the Write Tribe Wednesday #6 writing prompt
I kept watching the
clock. It was only 15 minutes until I
could clock out and rush to meet her.
Today is the day! I am going to
propose to the love of my life! I can’t
wait to meet her at our favorite restaurant.
She has no idea that in my pocket I hold the diamond ring I chose for
her. She only knows we are to meet.
She had texted me
earlier that she only had a few more errands to run and then we could be
together. By then, my work day will be
over and the weekend can begin. I love
weekends because I spend every moment with her.
How I love her, and tonight she will finally know how much.
As I log off my
computer my phone rings. Should I
answer? I don’t want too. I want to start my weekend!! I want to rush to her side. I want her to say yes so we can begin the
rest of our lives together. I see on the caller
ID it is her mother. I better answer.
With a song in my
heart I answer to discover her mother sobbing on the other end. My breath catches as I hear the news. My heart stops a beat. There has been an accident and my love has
been killed. My life is as over as is hers. “How will I live without her?” I
wonder as I am overtaken with heart retching sobs.
This is so sad and affecting. Nicely done. :)
ReplyDeleteDana, I am so happy you enjoyed it!! Thank you for stopping in and for your kind comments!
DeleteThat was just a tad on the heartbreaking side...... :(
ReplyDeleteJoJo, that was the idea. I thought the guy looked devastated in the picture prompt so this was the story that flowed out of me. I am pleased you enjoyed it! Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments!
DeleteOh so sad.
ReplyDeleteSally, yes...that is what I was going for! Thank youforstopping in and for your kind comments!
Delete"With a song in my heart I answer"...lovely line Kathy. Nice little piece!
ReplyDeleteAmy, I am so pleased you enjoyed it as much as I enjoyed writing it. Thank you for stopping in and for your kind comments!
DeleteOh, Kathy! Did you really have to kill the love of his life? You are such a brutal author.
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Joyce, can't always have the happy happy joy joy ending. Besides the guy is obviously devastated in the picture. Thank you for stopping in and for your kind comments!
Deletenice, kathy.... you should watch the movie, one day, with anne hathaway...
ReplyDeleteDanneromero, I have never seen it. I will have to check it out. Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments!!
DeleteShort, but powerful!
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Rob-bear, I am so pleased you enjoyed it! Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments!
Deleteso tragic! but the post did wonders to my heart... and the choice of song from Leann Rimes lovely :)
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Richa, I am so pleased you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for stopping in and for your kind comments! ♥
DeleteKathy: Very touching piece! It shows the fragility of life and how we don't have as much control on life as we like to think. Very powerful!
ReplyDeleteWinnie, I am so happy that you enjoyed it. Unless a person has lost someone close to them I don't think they realize the fragility of life or how precious it is. Thank you for stopping in and for your kind comments! ♥
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