Monday, March 24, 2014

Sand Haiku




Burying my toes


Flowing through time’s hourglass


Constructing castles 





Inspired by the prompt at


54 comments:

  1. Lovely! How perfectly you connected the ways of sand..

    Richa

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    1. Richa, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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    1. Martha, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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    1. rajkumarmilan, I am so happy you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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    1. JoJo, me too! I haven't been in years but would love to go. Would love to experience the sand between my toes and the waves rushing in and out again. I keep trying to convince my husband to go every year, and every year we never make it. Hope we do this year! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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    1. Reshma, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  6. Sand is such multi-faceted stuff! Lots of good imagery here in this poem, Kathy. Nice to see you here again! :)

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    1. Tom, I am so pleased you enjoyed it! Thanks for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  7. Fun to play in the sand, the cat for other reasons, thinks it is grand

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    1. Pat, LOL yeah cats tend to use sand for a toilet! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments. ♥

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  8. This haiku rocks. It takes relentless time to the beach and makes san castles. Good one.

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    1. alicekeysmd, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  9. Amazing thought there...
    Especially the inter-connection you have made...
    Brilliant!

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    1. Locomente, I am so pleased you enjoyed it!! Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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    1. Kristjaan, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  11. Love how you brought this about without once mentioning sand....!

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    1. Corinne, I am so happy you liked it!! Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  12. castles in the sand :) reminds me of how I used to play in the beaches

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    1. Rajlakshmi, I love building sandcastles! It was fun at the beach. I had a sand box while growing up and it was equally fun to build castles there too. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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    1. Sumana, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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    1. readingpleasure, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  15. Love ur Haiku, Kathy and it's perfect. I tried once but miserably failed:)

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    1. vishalbheeroo, I am so pleased you enjoyed my haiku! You should give it another go..practice makes perfect! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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    1. Cheryl, I am so happy you liked it! Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  17. This is beautiful, Kathy! I'm strange, though... the feel of sand on my feet makes me cringe. When we go, I have to wear shoes.

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    1. jannatwrites, well, usually the sand is pretty hot in the summer so I have seen others wearing shoes! I am so pleased you enjoyed my haiku, Thank you for stopping by to read and for your lovely comments! ♥

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    1. Magical Mystical Teacher, you sure can! Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  19. Ah, sand..the building block of dreams!

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    1. Michelle, it surely is! Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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    1. rudraprayaga, I am so pleased you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for stopping in and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  21. Very well penned thoughts on sand.. lovely haiku!

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    1. payal, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you so much for your sweet comments! ♥

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    1. Managua, I am so happy you liked it! Thank you so much for stopping by and for your lovely comments! ♥

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  24. That's a wonderful one, yet again, Kathy!! :)

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    1. Shilpa, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you very much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  25. I'm a toes in the sand girl and I really like this. ❤️

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    1. Jo, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you so much for stopping by to read and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  26. Perfect construction of vivid imagery and visual. Too beautiful:)

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    1. vishal, I am so happy you liked it! Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  27. You have a magical touch in writing these Haiku! They are so deep... Really beautiful!

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    1. Shesha, thank you! I am so happy you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and leaving me smiling! ♥

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