While
traveling on a vacation of a lifetime to scenic Italy with my best friends, I
felt the sudden urge to relieve myself.
Pointing, I exclaimed
“As I pee,
sir, I see Pisa!”
This week the folks at trifectachallenged us to use a palindrome in a short story of a mere 33 words. A palindrome is a word or phrase that reads the same forward as it does backwards.
JoJo, I am so pleased you liked it!! LOL! Usually I just sit down and write it...and that's it. This one I just sat down and picked a palindrome from a list and the rest just happened. If it doesn't just flow, I stop what I am doing and do something else and come back to it. Usually it just comes to me and flows through my fingertips. I can't explain it. If I have to work at it, then I just don't do it. I walk away. Hope that answers your question. LOL Thank you so much for stopping by to read and for your sweet comments, and all your encouragement! ♥
Pat, a little more pee and we'll flood the place and need a gondola to get around. :P LOL I am so please you enjoyed it. Thank you for stopping by and for your lovely comments! ♥
Under the solemn circumstances so many of these posts are being written, we all needed a good pee in the worst way. Thanks for this and for everything else that you have posted under the Trifecta banner that has lifted our spirits and made us smile. You are a great writer with a big heart. Best of luck in the world beyond Trifecta.
Tom, it is sad circumstances. I wish trifecta could continue. I am so pleased that you stopped by to read and I appreciate your sweet comments. Hope to see keep in touch long after trifecta is a sweet memory! ♥
Shilpa, I am so pleased you got a giggle out of this and enjoyed it as much as I had fun writing it. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
Optimistic Existentialist, you are very welcome. I am so pleased you enjoyed the good healthy pee you found here. Thank you for stopping by to read and for your lovely comments! ♥
That's a hard challenge! I kind of dropped out of the Trifecta writing, but I'm going to try to get in on one of their final challenges...sad to see it end.
jannatwrites. this was really a fun challenge. It made me even sadder to realize it is one of Trifecta's last. I will be so sad to see it end because I feel that Trifecta really helped me grow as a writer. There are few challenges out there that can boast that benefit plus bring you in contact with writers who truly have extraordinary talent. Thank you for stopping by to read and for your sweet comments! ♥
Nabanita, who would have thought peeing would have went over so well? LOL I am so happy you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
Michelle, I am so pleased! You could just get a mental picture of some guy hanging it out and peeing and exclaiming about the view. LOLOLOLOL Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
Heehee. I was hopin' somebody would use that one. ;)
ReplyDeletewhimsygizmo, I simply couldn't resist!! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments. This was a fun prompt to write. ♥
DeleteHey that's a good one! You are so good at these writing challenges! How many tries does it take you to come up w/ this stuff?
ReplyDeleteJoJo, I am so pleased you liked it!! LOL! Usually I just sit down and write it...and that's it. This one I just sat down and picked a palindrome from a list and the rest just happened. If it doesn't just flow, I stop what I am doing and do something else and come back to it. Usually it just comes to me and flows through my fingertips. I can't explain it. If I have to work at it, then I just don't do it. I walk away. Hope that answers your question. LOL Thank you so much for stopping by to read and for your sweet comments, and all your encouragement! ♥
DeleteDouble the pee, well sorta haha
ReplyDeletePat, a little more pee and we'll flood the place and need a gondola to get around. :P LOL I am so please you enjoyed it. Thank you for stopping by and for your lovely comments! ♥
DeleteUnder the solemn circumstances so many of these posts are being written, we all needed a good pee in the worst way. Thanks for this and for everything else that you have posted under the Trifecta banner that has lifted our spirits and made us smile. You are a great writer with a big heart. Best of luck in the world beyond Trifecta.
ReplyDeleteTom, it is sad circumstances. I wish trifecta could continue. I am so pleased that you stopped by to read and I appreciate your sweet comments. Hope to see keep in touch long after trifecta is a sweet memory! ♥
DeleteHahaha! That's a good one, Kathy!! :D
ReplyDeleteShilpa, I am so pleased you got a giggle out of this and enjoyed it as much as I had fun writing it. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteROFL :D that's a good one :D hahaha
ReplyDeleteRajlakshmi, I am so pleased you got a giggle from it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteHaha! Thanks for the laugh. XD
ReplyDeletelovethebadguy.com, I am so pleased you enjoyed it and got a giggle! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteLOL! Love your humor!
ReplyDeleteMartha, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteThanks for giving me a morning laugh :) good one.
ReplyDeleteOptimistic Existentialist, you are very welcome. I am so pleased you enjoyed the good healthy pee you found here. Thank you for stopping by to read and for your lovely comments! ♥
DeleteHaha. Love that one. It reminds me of Green Eggs and Ham.
ReplyDeletekymm, LOLOLOLOL That is funny! Thank you for stopping by and for the giggle. I am so pleased you liked it! ♥
DeleteHa ha, cleverly done Kathy!!
ReplyDeleteReshma, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
Deletesuch fun in those 33 words for sure. I loved it!
ReplyDeleteKir, I am so pleased you liked it. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteThat's a hard challenge! I kind of dropped out of the Trifecta writing, but I'm going to try to get in on one of their final challenges...sad to see it end.
ReplyDeletejannatwrites. this was really a fun challenge. It made me even sadder to realize it is one of Trifecta's last. I will be so sad to see it end because I feel that Trifecta really helped me grow as a writer. There are few challenges out there that can boast that benefit plus bring you in contact with writers who truly have extraordinary talent. Thank you for stopping by to read and for your sweet comments! ♥
Delete*hahahaha* I love the irreverence of this! Thanks for the giggle - I needed it!
ReplyDeletetrudgingthroughfog, you are very welcome. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteBrilliant! Fun, and genuine. This belongs on a Hallmark card, and has a timeless quality to it. And just plain funny. Nice work!
ReplyDeleteTurok, LOL it would be special on a Hallmark card. I am so pleased you liked it. Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments. ♥
DeleteOh Kathy! What a palindrome you picked :D I am laughing out loud!
ReplyDeleteShailaja, I am so pleased you liked it. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
Deletehaha this was brilliant Kathy! Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteNabanita, who would have thought peeing would have went over so well? LOL I am so happy you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteLOL! That was brilliant! :)
ReplyDeleteSheethal, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteHaha...that was brilliant Kathy!! :)
ReplyDeleteAditi, I am so pleased you enjoyed it. This was a fun one to write! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteI am giggling here, Kathy! You are a riot! :)
ReplyDeleteVidya, I am so pleased you got a giggle! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteHilarious post but also very creative :)
ReplyDeletesulekkha, I am so pleased you enjoyed it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteOk, you just had me rolling over the floor with laughter there. A good one!
ReplyDeleteMichelle, I am so pleased! You could just get a mental picture of some guy hanging it out and peeing and exclaiming about the view. LOLOLOLOL Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteVery funny and creative post, Kathy. I love it!
ReplyDeleteMichelle, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
Deletehahahaha :) That was fantastic, Kathy :) the imagery...LoL :D Very creative !
ReplyDeleteSreeja, I am so pleased you enjoyed it. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteOh, that's so clever AND bawdy! That makes it doubly good, you know. :)
ReplyDeletetinsenpup.net, this was a fun one to write and I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
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