Tuesday, January 13, 2015

Try Haiku






essential attempts
undertaking the struggle
quest to achieve goals


Inspired by the prompt at










24 comments:

  1. And if that doesn't work, try try again

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    1. Pat, exactly! Thanks for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  2. without trying, there's no wining.

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    1. Rajlakshmi, very true! Thank you so much for stopping by and for your kind comments! ♥

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    1. tulika, I am so happy you liked it! Thanks for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  4. So nice - really like how you wrote the haiku without using the specific prompt word so creatively

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    1. Judith, I am so pleased you liked it! I try really hard to keep the specific prompt word out when I write these things. Sometimes it is a real challenge!! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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    1. Nabanita, that is about all any of us can do! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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    1. iwrotethose.com, I am so pleased you liked it! Thanks so much for stopping in and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  7. Yess ... and keep on trying.. life is in it :) Nice one :)

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    1. Kokila, exactly! Thanks for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  8. And now I have Janis Joplin's 'Try' stuck in my head. That's OK, there are worse songs....lol

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    1. JoJo, Oh I'm sorry! Lol Thanks for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  9. Quest indeed! All I keep hearing is Yoda's voice: "Do. Or do not. There is not try." =)

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    1. Crystal, amen! HA HA HA Thank you for stopping in and for your sweet comments! ♥

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    1. shellymona, I am pleased you liked it! Thanks for stopping in and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  11. I have attempted haiku and like your poem stated, struggled with it. However, I eventually penned one or two - one on someone's blog I think and/or mine (?!) However, I do not think there is necessarily a 'try' at it, rather a doing or not doing! ;) <3

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    1. elly, very true. Thanks for stopping by and for your comments! ♥

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  12. ha! I would just keep trying and then rant out of frustration because I could never write a Haiku!

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    1. pixie, I bet you could! Thanks for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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