Debbie, I am so happy you liked it. I tried a different angle for this prompt and tried to create more of a story with the words. Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
Pat, it surely can and most likely it will. It all depends how open we are to possibilities. Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
Shanaya, I am so happy you liked it! Sometimes it can be a bit tricky but that is what makes them kind of fun to write. Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments!♥
Daniel, I am so pleased you liked it! I am pretty relieved I was able to come up with something for this one. It seems like the prompts are getting more challenging the longer it goes. Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
Ramesh, I am so pleased you liked it! I have just started to spread my wings a bit with my haiku and start creating more stories. Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
Aww...too sad! We all need passion in our lives and hopefully, it will come again. Amazing what you can convey in three short lines, Kathy. Good one!
ReplyDeleteDebbie, I am so happy you liked it. I tried a different angle for this prompt and tried to create more of a story with the words. Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteGone the way of the dodo, but unlike them it can come back
ReplyDeletePat, it surely can and most likely it will. It all depends how open we are to possibilities. Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteBeautifully written. A touch of sadness there. I loved it!
ReplyDeleteEmily, I am so happy you liked it! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteHow sad is that!
ReplyDeletetulika, pretty sad! Thanks so much for stopping by to read and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteI am always amazed by how people can convey so much in so few words. I really liked this one. :)
ReplyDeleteShanaya, I am so happy you liked it! Sometimes it can be a bit tricky but that is what makes them kind of fun to write. Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments!♥
DeleteOh, you can bring back the passion;) Good one, Kathy.
ReplyDeleteAjay, I am so pleased you liked it. High praise coming from a master poet like you! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeletePoignant!
ReplyDeleteShilpa, I am so pleased you liked it! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
Deletevery poignant indeed....
ReplyDeleteArchana, I am so pleased you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteOuch. :( I think we've all experienced that.
ReplyDeleteJoJo, I know I have! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteAww that's sad - hopefully ancient can become current :)
ReplyDeleteSuzy, hope so too! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥ I am so pleased you liked it.
Deletemm.. sad.. very nice haiku, a lot expressed in 3 sentences
ReplyDeleteMahathi, I am so pleased you liked it! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteAhh ! it's not always forever after , is it?
ReplyDeleteNabanita, nothing lasts forever. It is a harsh, sad fact of life. Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteA sad and beautiful one
ReplyDeleterallentanda, I am so pleased you liked it! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeletePowerful haiku!
ReplyDeleteDaniel, I am so pleased you liked it! I am pretty relieved I was able to come up with something for this one. It seems like the prompts are getting more challenging the longer it goes. Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteDeep with pathos !
ReplyDeleteMilan, I am so pleased you liked it! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteThis one is outstanding
ReplyDeleteRuby, I am so pleased you liked it! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteCreating stories in Haiku is always very satisfying without losing essence of haiku... great work.. RS:)
ReplyDeleteRamesh, I am so pleased you liked it! I have just started to spread my wings a bit with my haiku and start creating more stories. Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
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