Wednesday, October 21, 2015

Sweet Revenge

 


    Vicious nuisance, slaughtering her chickens. Once ensnared, she slaughtered him.  He simmers in a bath of red wine and spices.   Vengeance feels good. Wiping blood that has trickled from her mouth, she licks the spoon.   Revenge tastes sweeter with pinches of salt.




34 comments:

  1. Nicely done! Although to be honest, when I saw the prompt about a wolverine, I thought you were gonna do a Notre Dame/Michigan story. lol

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    1. JoJo, I am so pleased you liked it. I kind of went down the horror route with this one. Doing the whole Notre Dame/Michigan thing would have been way too obvious.

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  2. Yikes! That'll teach that wolverine to slaughter her chickens! Wonder if there was lots of hair in it. Gruesomely great!

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    1. Cathy, personally, I wouldn't want to mess with her. Yeah! I didn't even think of that grotesque detail! Ewwwww! LOLOLOL Thanks so much for stopping by to read and for your lovely comments! ♥

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  3. Oh my. I think I actually gagged at the end--but that's a good reaction for horror. I actually was envisioning a man who would slaughter her chickens, so there you have it. Wild imagination over here!

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    1. Crystal, I am going to take that as a compliment. That I could horrify you and make you gag with my words seems like kind of an accomplishment in some perverse sick way! LOL Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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    2. I always say if you can make someone feel, you've succeeded as a writer.

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    3. Crystal, I feel that way too. I always feel especially happy when someone reads my story and not only gets it but it makes them laugh, makes them sad, or in this case freaks them out and makes them gag. I am so happy I managed that with you for this one! Thanks again for stopping by and continuing the conversation. ♥

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  4. Pay back can sure taste great, I'll take your word for it though lol

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    1. Pat, hey...it's fiction! LOL I wouldn't eat it either! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  5. I can't imagine eating a wolverine, but I suppose this one tasted like chicken?

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    1. TMW, something tells me everything tastes like chicken! LOL ...oh boy. I would totally pass on the wolverine too. I'll just have a Coca Cola, thank you very much. Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  6. Oh..that was gruesome. Interesting take on the prompt.

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    1. Shanaya, I am so pleased you liked it! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  7. oooh yikes! Looks like she was pretty mad, ha ha :D Nice imagery Kathy! Really made it come alive for me.

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    1. Shailaja, YAY! I am so pleased you liked it. Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  8. Waste not, want not eh? Gotta replace those chickens with something!

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    1. Joe, exactly! Thanks for stopping by and for your comments! ♥

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  9. Oohhh...I wouldn't like to cross her! ;)

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    1. Corinne, me either. She is a bit psycho! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  10. EEwww..!! The result of vengeance! Nicely done!

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    1. Geets, I am so pleased you liked my story! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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    1. LuAnn, I am so pleased you liked it! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  12. Oh boy! Kathy, that was gruesome!

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    1. Shilpa, and that is what I was going for so YAY me! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  13. Revenge is sweet, indeed. And probably pairs beautiful with wine. ;)

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    1. Michaela, I am so pleased you liked my story! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  14. Oh gory. But so well written.

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    1. Suzy, I am so pleased you liked it! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  15. I have a weak stomach so I'm not sure I could handle the taste of revenge, haha!

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    1. jannatwrites, I personally couldn't do it! LOL Thanks for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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    1. Aditi, I am so pleased! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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