Tuesday, February 25, 2014

The Lucky One

100 Words on Saturday - Write Tribe




           He told everyone who had asked that he was in a relationship so they would back off.  He had even casually told her.   He talked to her every chance he got.  Women always threw themselves at him which irked the hell out of him.  Not her though, she was different. She had shot him a “well good for you” look when he bragged about his girlfriend as if she couldn’t care less which only made him want her more.  One day he would grow the balls needed to tell her she was the lucky one who had stolen his heart.

Written for the Write Tribe 100 Words on Saturday Writing Prompt.


36 comments:

  1. Nicely done. There a lot of men out there with this syndrome!

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    1. Jo, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments!

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  2. Nice. Hope they had a happy ending.

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    1. tulika, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments!

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  3. Hope he will tell her that she is the lucky one and the news would make her happy, at least eventually! :)

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    1. Bhavya, I agree. She needs to know. Maybe she feels that he could never like her and in all actuality she is the one for him! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments!

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  4. haha.. agree with Jo's comment... so many of us guys suffering from this.

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    1. Roshan, it makes me wonder how many women really like the guy but would never dream that they stand any chance with him. That is why I think the guy should reveal his feelings. Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments!

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    1. vishalbheeroo, I am so pleased you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for stopping by!

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  6. Aw, I hope he confesses soon though otherwise he may end up losing her too :) Great story that reflects the mindset of most men :)

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    1. Prasanna, I am so pleased you enjoyed it. It seems like most men think that way. LOL Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  7. Awwww! This is so cute. :) Lucky in Love. Both of them. :)

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    1. jyothiclicks, I am so pleased you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  8. Have a feeling she'll make him work for it

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    1. Pat, she just might considering what a ladies man he appears to be with so many women flocking to him. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  9. Very romantic! Are you going to Part 2 this?

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    1. JoJo, WOW, I hadn't really thought about that! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments. I am so pleased you enjoyed it. ♥

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  10. I hope he tell her soon!! Unrequited love is just sad...

    nicely don't for the prompt Kathy!! :)

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    1. pixie, I agree. It is only good if that love is returned! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  11. And in this way we can all expect part two of this then? And in this part we hope he manages to tell her his true feelings:-)

    Richa

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    1. Richa, as I mentioned to JoJo, I hadn't really thought I would continue this one but I guess I could. Thank you for stopping by, for your sweet comments, and your encouragement. ♥

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  12. Little does he know that she's attracted to him, but playing neutral, so he won't lose interest in her. She's smart. This is a lovely story, Kathy!

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    1. Michelle, I am so pleased you liked it!! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  13. Hope he does confess in the end. Because she's gonna be pissed if she find out herslef, somehow. :P

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    1. myriadrainbowhues, I don't know what the big deal is with guys. They should just fess up! It is probably the same reason we girls don't fess up when we like someone. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  14. I hope get gets the courage one day... Loved the story :)

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    1. Rajlakshmi, it sure would be nice!! LOL I am so pleased you liked my story! Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  15. I wish she comes to know soon, that too from him. I wish he's courageous enough to speak it out to her. I wish the love gets fulfilled. Oh...how I wish ! :) nice take on the prompt, dear:)

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    1. Sreeja, I feel the same way! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  16. I hope he tells her soon! And good use of Bradley Cooper's pic for this one, it made the tale more believable! God I love him! :D

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    1. Nabanita, I love Bradley Cooper. The man is too HOT for words!! LOLOLOLOL I am so pleased you enjoyed my story! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  17. Very true Kathy, it takes a courageous man to bare his heart to a woman.

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    1. Reshma, it sure does! More men should be courageous! It sure would makes things a bit easier on us girls! Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments! ♥

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  18. I think it's funny that she doesn't know (or acknowledge that she knows) how he feels!

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    1. jannatwrites, LOL maybe she thinks she is imagining it since he blatantly denies it. Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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