Tuesday, October 29, 2013

The Search Haiku

Written for Haiku Heights #306 writing prompt




he rummaged deeper

until his favorite emerged

a shiny red truck









28 comments:

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    1. Jo, Thank you so much for stopping by. I am so happy that you enjoyed it!!! ♥

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  2. Ah the joy of finding your coveted possession!! Well rummaged :)

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    1. Reshma, I remember digging in the toy box. All my toys would end up on the floor around me as I continued to search. The toy I wanted always was the LAST one I found at the bottom. Go figure! Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments! ♥

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  3. if you look long and hard, then you will find what you need more ... that's life!

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    1. Geli, yes, and what an adventure it is! Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments! ♥

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  4. I love this! It reminds me of my son. :)

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    1. Dana, I am so pleased you enjoyed it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  5. That's really cute and in line with the name of your blog.

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    1. Geeta, I hadn't even thought of that when I wrote this! LOL Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments! I am so happy you liked it. ♥

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  6. Aha! The happiness at finding the red truck! Priceless :)

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    1. Shilpa, I am so pleased you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  7. My son had a red toy truck and he loved it.

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    1. Kalpana, even if we have many toys there is always that favorite special one. Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments! ♥

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  8. Childhood days!!!
    Nice...

    Please follow the link to read mine:
    http://locomente.blogspot.com/2013/10/alcoholic.html

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    1. Locomente, I am so pleased you liked it. Thank you for stopping in and for your kind comments! ♥

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  9. Lovely haiku, Kathy! I have a little cousin who does that... :)

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    1. shilpasharmaonline, I am so pleased you enjoyed it. Being a mom of 2 it was the first thing I thought of!! I need to get out more. LOL Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments! ♥

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  10. My son still has his yellow truck hidden somewhere. And he is 16 now. :D

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    1. joyothisdayout, I imagine by the time my son is 16 his trucks may have found their way to the attic...but who knows? My husband still has trucks sitting about and some he still plays with although those are the big radio control gas powered monster trucks. Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments! ♥

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    1. Kendall, thank you for stopping by! I am so happy you liked it! ♥

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  12. Oh back to my childhood days.....true rummaging this is !!!! wonderful :)

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    1. Sumana, it is even fun when you are all grown up, your folks have passed on, and you find yourself rummaging inside boxes filled with favorite toys and memories. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  13. I don't think if there is a better and more nostalgic haiku... I wrote on similar theme...and find yours better.. had you not put the picture..mind would have created it....Excellent.

    RS:)

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    1. Ramesh, Wow. I am speechless and so grateful for your kind words. Thank you for stopping by and making my day with your comments!! I appreciate them so much. Comments like yours make continuing to write seem worthwhile! ♥

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    1. Sugandha, I am so pleased you enjoyed it! Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments! ♥

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