Thursday, October 31, 2013

Trapped

A 55 word fictional thriller in the spirit of Halloween.



      The door stood ajar, so she pushed it open and entered inquiring if anyone was there.   The door slammed shut and locked itself.  

      Terrified, she whirled around wishing she had never come looking for help.  She heard a spine tingling laugh, he grabbed her, and she was imprisoned: an unsuspecting victim caught in his trap.



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18 comments:

  1. UnknownOctober 31, 2013 at 3:07 PM

    Sure can be spine chilling.

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    1. UnknownNovember 1, 2013 at 5:13 PM

      Geeta, I am so pleased you think so! That is exactly what I was trying to achieve. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  2. Martha Jane OrlandoOctober 31, 2013 at 9:26 PM

    Scared me! Happy Halloween, Kathy!

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    1. UnknownNovember 1, 2013 at 5:15 PM

      Martha, I am so pleased! Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments! ♥

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  3. Sumana RoyOctober 31, 2013 at 10:01 PM

    a suspense thriller in so few wpords....love this :)

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    1. UnknownNovember 1, 2013 at 5:21 PM

      Sumana, I am so pleased you liked it!! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments. I really enjoying capturing a story in very few words. It is challenging and fun! ♥

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  4. AnonymousNovember 1, 2013 at 5:28 AM

    Oh No! That send a chill through my spine! Happy Halloween Kathy. :)

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    1. UnknownNovember 1, 2013 at 5:23 PM

      joyothisdayout, I am thrilled. That was exactly what I was trying to do!! YAY! Thank you for stopping by and making my day. Happy Halloween to you! ♥

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  5. NikhilNovember 1, 2013 at 7:06 AM

    I am glad to tell you that ,I have nominated you for a Liebster Blog Award on my blog.:)
    Please check out the following link & go through the rules & guidelines for accepting the award.:)

    http://aficionadolog.blogspot.com/2013/11/my-second-liebster-this-weekdouble.html

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    1. UnknownNovember 1, 2013 at 5:23 PM

      Nikhil, I am so thrilled and honored! Thank you so much!! ♥

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  6. JoJoNovember 1, 2013 at 10:37 AM

    SCARY!!!!

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    1. UnknownNovember 1, 2013 at 5:54 PM

      JoJo, that was exactly what I was going for! Thank you for stopping by. Hope you and Russell had a great Halloween! ♥

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  7. AnonymousNovember 1, 2013 at 12:04 PM

    Creepy, creepy, creepy!!! I swear you and my sister are out to kill me with all of your creepiness this month! Wtf Kathy! You're going to have to post messages to me on FB letting me know when you're blogging creepy stuff! :p

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    1. UnknownNovember 1, 2013 at 5:57 PM

      MiMi, actually creepy and scary is what I was going for...a true Halloween thriller. I am so pleased I was able to creep you out with so few words. For some perverse reason it makes me really happy! LOL ♥

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  8. AnonymousNovember 2, 2013 at 4:48 AM

    I wish this never happens to anyone. But a wonderful 55er Kathy. Enjoyed it very much. :)

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    1. UnknownNovember 2, 2013 at 12:24 PM

      shilpasharmaonline, I wouldn't fancy it happening to me either truth be told but I have seen things like it in the movies. So happy you enjoyed it. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  9. UnknownNovember 30, 2013 at 5:58 AM

    Welcome, said the spider to the fly! Loved it!

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    1. UnknownDecember 1, 2013 at 9:43 AM

      Leigh, I am so happy you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments!

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