Until the
day I die, I’ll never forget those glassy, unblinking eyes. She needed to die, plain and simple. She had known entirely too much and was
getting a little too free with sharing the knowledge. I couldn’t afford to have her blabbing my
business. It would cost me
everything. Not only that, a lot bigger heads would roll
if I were ever caught. It would be a
classic domino effect, and they would make sure I paid dearly with my life if
that ever happened. I should have never got involved with her in
the first place. Looking back now, I
know I simply couldn’t resist. She was
hot…and a piece of work. She had needed
the job, so I had hired her as a receptionist at the art gallery thinking at
the time she wasn’t too bright. Little
did I know that the beautiful bombshell actually did have a brain to go with
those sapphire eyes, long sexy legs, and amazing rack.
All of a sudden she starting putting 2
and 2 together, and lo and behold, it didn’t always add up to 4. We were exporting art overseas packed with
cartons lined with bags of the best cocaine money could buy. The shipments were worth millions. We packed it all in the best smelling coffee
grounds to throw the scent off so the drug hounds at customs wouldn’t get wise
to the operation. All was going like
clockwork until I decided to give in to lust and sleep with the bimbo. That is when everything started going south. I fancied myself falling for her. I found her intoxicating and my tongue
loosened up when she was around. Once
she figured out that my business didn’t only involve art, she got scared. A scared woman with too much explosive
knowledge can be dangerous. I had no
intention of going to prison for a loose tongued piece of ass no matter how
good it was.
So I killed her. We had been intimate, so I figured it was up
to me to get rid of her. A friend of the
boss owns the crematory in town and they wasted no time cremating her remains
and helping me clean up the mess. I
personally packed what was left of Bridget in a crate holding Albrecht Durer’s
painting of Oswalt Krel among this week’s shipment of coffee grounds and
drugs. My associates overseas would see
to it that her ashes were disposed of.
No one would ever have to know. As a stroke of luck, Bridget seemed alone in
the world so no one should come asking questions. If they do, I know nothing. Surprisingly, I have never killed anyone
before and never hope to again. It left
a bad taste in my mouth. However, if
they get in the way of business like the fair Bridget did I will be left with
no choice. After all, business is
business.
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Good narration. Liked the flow and the twists :-)
ReplyDeleteJayanta, I am so pleased you enjoyed my story! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteAn interesting read Kathy...I like the ambiguity of gender of the storyteller. ;-)
ReplyDeleteJoe, I am so pleased you enjoyed my story. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteMy goodness! You had me right from the beginning, but did you really have to kill her? :)
ReplyDeleteCarol, in my mind yes. I was trying to portray a drug dealer worried about covering his own ass and saving his own skin. That is what I imagine one of those type of folks do. He is so far into it, that there is no turning back and if he ever so much as dropped his guard it could be his own undoing. I am so pleased you enjoyed my story. Not sure why some of my stories get so blood thirsty. LOL Just how it flows and comes out. Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteOh wow, Kathy! That was a cold-blooded killer. What iron precision in his planning. Stunning narrative. The Speakeasy is lucky to have this entry this week. Very well done!
ReplyDeleteShailaja, you say the sweetest things!! Thank you for stopping by to read and for your sweet comments! You really made my day. Unfortunately for me, and good for me...the Speakeasy is filled with far talented writers than I will ever be. I keep hoping that some of that sparkle will rub off by association. :)
DeleteHe is one icy psychopath, no regrets. I feel sorry for the next receptionist. Superb.
ReplyDeleteSusan, thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! I am so happy you liked my story! ♥
DeleteWow that's cold! lol
ReplyDeleteJoJo, I am so pleased you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteGreat story! I absolutely love the twist you gave to this AND appreciate that the staring eyes belonged to a woman rather than to the man I kept seeing while I wrote my version. Perfecto!
ReplyDeletemamamickterry, I am so pleased you enjoyed my story! Thank you so much for stopping by and for your amazing comments! ♥
DeleteTruly, business is business. Keep rockin', dealer! Great job :D
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Samriddhi, I am so pleased you enjoyed my story!! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteVery intense and a little unnerving too. Makes one want to choose their business partners a little bit more carefully...
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MJ, yeah no kidding! Thank you for stopping by and for your lovely comments! ♥
DeleteGreat job. Very disturbing, which means it did exactly what it was supposed to do!
ReplyDeleteStephanie, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteGreat story. Never judge a book by it's cover, eh?
ReplyDeletetnkerr, exactly! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteSomehow I think it will come back to bite him. I can't see him getting away with it without leaving any kind of trace. (I think I've been watching too much Forensic Files!)
ReplyDeletejannatwrites, eventually it probably will but at least at this point he is pretty confident in himself! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteKathy, you've outdone yourself with this one. It was positively gripping! I see a book of your short stories soon! :)
ReplyDeleteCorinne, I am so pleased you enjoyed it!! Practice makes perfect. Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteThat was riveting Kathy! Love the cold calm of the "business is business" line and I'm thinking this is a great way to get rid of dead bodies. I wonder if that's what happened to Jimmy Hoffa? LOL
ReplyDeleteDebbie, I am so pleased you enjoyed my story! No one will ever really know what happened to Jimmy Hoffa!! LOL One of life's great mysteries! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
Deletewoww you have flair for writing crime stories... this is brilliant. Cold murder and gripping narration.
ReplyDeleteRajlakshmi, I am so pleased you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteIs the killer a 'he' or a 'she' ! And such cold bloodedness...You're an amazing narrator, Kathy !
ReplyDeleteSreeja, in my mind he was a he! HA HA But NOW you have me wondering! Thank you for the giggles and for the amazing compliments in your comments! I am all smiles from the honey glow of it! ♥
DeleteA bit of a Noir Vibe going on here... with a surprise ending... Love it.
ReplyDeleteWait... Kathy is the writer, not the person telling the story. I thought when I saw 'Kathy' it was a woman narrating the story instead of a guy... I think a woman makes it even better.
Deletetestrutz, I am so pleased you liked it! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteI wish she had not been killed :(
ReplyDeletePratibha, I felt it made the story a bit more realistic to do her in. Thank you for stopping by to read and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteCold-blooded or what? Great voice for your narrator, Kathy – so matter of fact about everything, even killing. Nicely done! :)
ReplyDeleteSuzanne, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteBrutal work, killing is -- and yet, done so easily and swiftly by your crafty, believable narrator. I like how you used the painting as part of the crime. Kudos, Kathy!
ReplyDeletemagoo45, I am so pleased you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteHa!ha!What a wicked cool take and love the voice you used:-) Great job Kathy !
ReplyDeleteAtreyee, I am so pleased you enjoyed it so much! Thank you so very much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
Deletewo wo wo, is all I can think. This reminded me of a scene in the Sopranos when a woman is threatened by the FBI with the discussion of her meetings with them. It is so true you can know too much too fast with a sociopath. Good write.
ReplyDeleteAnn, I am so pleased you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
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