Two best
friends contemplate the pregnancy kit with trepidation, carefully reading the
instructions. A positive result will change everything. No college, no life, no man, reputation
ruined, no future…oh God!
Seconds tick, sweat forms, breaths held. Judgment comes: sighs, tears, sweet relief.
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I hope they both learned a lesson from this experience. I felt their tension and fear building up through your wonderful writing, Kathy. I can never tell what You're going to write next, but enjoy guessing because I know you'll never disappoint.
ReplyDeleteMichelle, I am so pleased you enjoyed it. Your kind words are a balm and such an encouragement to write more stories! Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! They mean an awful lot to me! ♥
DeleteNever have sex willy nilly or at least make sure he wraps his willy lol
ReplyDeletePat, and believe me...my kids get a bit older and I am going to be one of Trojan's best customers. HA HA HA!! You crack me up, but you speak truth! Thanks for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeletePhew! Definitely a relief.
ReplyDeleteLaurel, I am so pleased you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteAah! Thank God!! :D
ReplyDeleteThat was a wonderful twist, Kathy! :)
Shilpa, I am so pleased you liked it! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteSo much said in just a few words, Kathy :)
ReplyDeleteRelief indeed!
Anita, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteOh yeah.....scary thing to have happen for sure. lol Lesson learned!!!
ReplyDeleteJoJo, yep it would be a real wake up call, that is for sure! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteI love how you can build such suspense with so few words, Kathy. That is a gift, indeed!
ReplyDeleteBlessings!
Martha, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteOhh the relief of not having to alter ones life!
ReplyDeleteNabanita, it sure would be! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteSuch a life altering, huge relief in so few words ! Congrats for that Kathy :)
ReplyDeleteKoklia, I am so pleased you liked it! Thanks for stopping in and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteLife puts forth lot of challenges.....Nice take.
ReplyDeleteAuraOfThoughts, I am so happy you liked it! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteOh such a suspenseful moment! Thank goodness for negative results: what a relief! ;) <3
ReplyDeleteelly, I am so pleased you liked it! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteWhew! Thank God for that. Liked how you built that up Kathy.
ReplyDeletetulika, I am so happy you liked it! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteVery suspenseful, and a good solid answer to the question! Nice job, Kathy.
ReplyDeleteChristine, I am thrilled you liked it! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteWhen negative becomes the positive thing. :) Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteVinitha, I am so pleased you liked it! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteI'm glad for the happy outcome!
ReplyDeleteTMW, I am happy you liked it! Thanks for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteWhew! I remember those days. :-) Good write!
ReplyDeletesusanwritesprecise.com, I am really happy you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for stopping in and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteOh my gosh, Pat's comment cracked me up! I never went through this, thank goodness. I do have a friend that did... she managed to graduate college and her son graduated high school in May (she raised him alone.)
ReplyDeletejannatwrites, I am thankful to say I never did either. That would scary, especially at that age! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteEnjoyed reading this post, Kathy. Divine justice, as they say.
ReplyDeletevishalbheeroo, I am so pleased you enjoyed reading it. Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments. ♥
DeleteYou have wonderfully built up such a suspense in so few words. Only you can do it ,Kathy.
ReplyDeleteUsha, you are so sweet with your compliments! I am so happy you liked it! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your comments♥
DeleteWhew!! You have such a way with words! :)
ReplyDeletepixie, I am so glad you liked it! Thanks so much for stopping in, for your kind comments, and most of all for your friendship! ♥
DeleteWow! What a sucker punch to the gut! What happens next?
ReplyDeleteNew Release Books, they may choose to be a bit more careful next time around! Thanks for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
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