Wednesday, December 10, 2014

Sweet Relief

      Two best friends contemplate the pregnancy kit with trepidation, carefully reading the instructions.   A positive result will change everything.  No college, no life, no man, reputation ruined, no future…oh God! 

     Seconds tick, sweat forms, breaths held.  Judgment comes:  sighs, tears, sweet relief.  






42 comments:

  1. I hope they both learned a lesson from this experience. I felt their tension and fear building up through your wonderful writing, Kathy. I can never tell what You're going to write next, but enjoy guessing because I know you'll never disappoint.

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    1. Michelle, I am so pleased you enjoyed it. Your kind words are a balm and such an encouragement to write more stories! Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! They mean an awful lot to me! ♥

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  2. Never have sex willy nilly or at least make sure he wraps his willy lol

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    1. Pat, and believe me...my kids get a bit older and I am going to be one of Trojan's best customers. HA HA HA!! You crack me up, but you speak truth! Thanks for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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    1. Laurel, I am so pleased you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  4. Aah! Thank God!! :D
    That was a wonderful twist, Kathy! :)

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    1. Shilpa, I am so pleased you liked it! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  5. So much said in just a few words, Kathy :)
    Relief indeed!

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    1. Anita, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  6. Oh yeah.....scary thing to have happen for sure. lol Lesson learned!!!

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    1. JoJo, yep it would be a real wake up call, that is for sure! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  7. I love how you can build such suspense with so few words, Kathy. That is a gift, indeed!
    Blessings!

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    1. Martha, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  8. Ohh the relief of not having to alter ones life!

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    1. Nabanita, it sure would be! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  9. Such a life altering, huge relief in so few words ! Congrats for that Kathy :)

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    1. Koklia, I am so pleased you liked it! Thanks for stopping in and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  10. Life puts forth lot of challenges.....Nice take.

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    1. AuraOfThoughts, I am so happy you liked it! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  11. Oh such a suspenseful moment! Thank goodness for negative results: what a relief! ;) <3

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    1. elly, I am so pleased you liked it! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  12. Whew! Thank God for that. Liked how you built that up Kathy.

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    1. tulika, I am so happy you liked it! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  13. Very suspenseful, and a good solid answer to the question! Nice job, Kathy.

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    1. Christine, I am thrilled you liked it! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  14. When negative becomes the positive thing. :) Nicely done.

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    1. Vinitha, I am so pleased you liked it! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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    1. TMW, I am happy you liked it! Thanks for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  16. Whew! I remember those days. :-) Good write!

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    1. susanwritesprecise.com, I am really happy you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for stopping in and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  17. Oh my gosh, Pat's comment cracked me up! I never went through this, thank goodness. I do have a friend that did... she managed to graduate college and her son graduated high school in May (she raised him alone.)

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    1. jannatwrites, I am thankful to say I never did either. That would scary, especially at that age! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  18. Enjoyed reading this post, Kathy. Divine justice, as they say.

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    1. vishalbheeroo, I am so pleased you enjoyed reading it. Thanks so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments. ♥

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  19. You have wonderfully built up such a suspense in so few words. Only you can do it ,Kathy.

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    1. Usha, you are so sweet with your compliments! I am so happy you liked it! Thanks so much for stopping by and for your comments♥

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  20. Whew!! You have such a way with words! :)

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    1. pixie, I am so glad you liked it! Thanks so much for stopping in, for your kind comments, and most of all for your friendship! ♥

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  21. Wow! What a sucker punch to the gut! What happens next?

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    1. New Release Books, they may choose to be a bit more careful next time around! Thanks for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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