Instantly enraged she swerved in front of traffic and jumped the curb barely missing them. Jumping from the car, she rushed up and exploded. “Working late again, are you? I see you are working hard to get her dress off you slime bag!” Fed up with his behavior, she pointed the gun at his crotch and fired. No more cheating!
This is a fictional story which I wrote for the Write Tribe's 100 Words on Saturday writing prompt.
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Kathy this a very sad story!! But he deserved it. Nicely written.
ReplyDeleteUsha, I am so pleased you enjoyed it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteOuch! I'm sure that's not how he expected the evening to go :)
ReplyDeletejannatwrites, I am sure he didn't. On the bright side, he won't be up to those shenanigans again. LOL Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteServes him right!! :P
ReplyDeleteShilpa, I think so too. Especially if he managed to give his poor wife a sexually transmitted disease. Thank you so much for stopping by and for your kind comments! ♥
Deletehaha...he deserves it!
ReplyDeleteNabanita, I think so too! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteAck! Not a good thing to happen. Kudos, Kathy!
ReplyDeleteMichelle, Thank you for stopping in and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteActually this one made me laugh! What a douche!
ReplyDeletemyriadrainbowhues, LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL Your comment made me laugh!! Yes he is a douche. A typical douche. LOLOLOLOLOLOL Thank you for stopping by and making me laugh hysterically!! So pleased you enjoyed my little story! ♥
DeleteNow there's a woman who has just had enough! Good job, Kathy.
ReplyDeleteJo, obviously she is not a woman that is to be crossed. Evidently he didn't expect that! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥ I am thrilled you liked my story!!!!
DeleteIf only this was the answer ...
ReplyDeletetakeawalkinthewoods, if only...which is why it is fiction where anything is possible and unicorns dance on the lawn like little pixies. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments. ♥
DeleteHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I love it! I could soooooo easily do this and walk past him to sit down to a nice steak dinner with a bottle of champagne to celebrate! I'll take my steak rare, bloody, bleeding in the street, detached ball sack, rare! Cheers!
ReplyDeleteGREAT post!
MiMi, your laughter and comments made me laugh so hard I almost peed my pants. LOLOLOL You know, I could see you doing just that. I am so pleased you enjoyed my story! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteOh my!!!!! Even more drastic than Lorena Bobbitt! lol
ReplyDeleteJoJo, at least in this case scenario there is no chance of someone finding his "package" alongside the road and sewing it back on. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments and giggles! ♥
DeleteWoo Hoo... That's serves him just right ... he is a carpenter without his tools now :) I wish all those being cheated get the strenth to stand up and stop the nonsense happening to them..
ReplyDeleteShiva, LOL cheating is nonsense and simply shouldn't happen in the first place!! I am so pleased you enjoyed my post. Thank you for stopping by and giving me a giggle! ♥
DeletePerfect retaliation!
ReplyDeletevery well written....
shellymona, I am so pleased you enjoyed it!! Thank you for stopping in and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteOh God! Such a powerful emotion hatred can be! Perfect for the prompt. Well done Kathy. :)
ReplyDeletejyothisdayout.com, I am so pleased you enjoyed it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteOh! That's a perfect one, kathy. It serves him right:)
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vishalbheeroo, I am so pleased you liked my story! Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteYikes! She got her revenge alright. Don't mess with her! Good use of the prompt.
ReplyDeleteWritercat59, she certainly did. I am so pleased you enjoyed my story! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
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