Kara walked daily often talking to him on her cell as she wandered the deserted park’s path. How dare she talk to him when he loved her so!
She ended the call, stopping to gaze
at the river. He added the silencer to
the gun. If he couldn’t have her, no one
else would either.
Aah! The violent obsessed lover boy!! :|
ReplyDeleteShilpa, ah yes! A real obsessed nut job for today! Thank you for stopping by. I am so pleased you enjoyed my little story! ♥
DeleteOh my God! It's scary! :( well written..
ReplyDeletepayal, happy to scare your pants off! Thank you for stopping by and for the sweet comments! ♥
DeleteShort and to the point! :) I enjoyed that and also like the new look of your site, Kathy. Have a good weekend.
ReplyDeleteDebbie, I am so pleased you liked my story! I am currently in the process of revamping and doing a redesign of my site. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteAh! scary! But such a nice point of view for the prompt.
ReplyDeletemyriadrainbowhues, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteViolent obsession is not healthy.
ReplyDeleteKalpana, no it isn't but it happens. Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments. ♥
Deletethat is cruel and ill minded...well written
ReplyDeleteKaran, I am so pleased you enjoyed it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteThat's quite an unhealthy obsession there. Very well written Kathy :)
ReplyDeleteiwrotethose, I am so pleased you enjoyed it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
Deleteoh my that's so tragic n obsessive !!
ReplyDeleteNabanita, I am so pleased you liked it. Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments! ♥
DeleteOh dear - tragic and scary that people can do that. Very well written and thank goodness it's fiction.
ReplyDeleteSuzy, there are people in this world that are not at all mentally stable. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteScary!
ReplyDeleteJoJo, so pleased you enjoyed it and found it chilling. Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments! ♥
DeleteOh God! A jealous stalker! Yikes! Nicely done Kathy. :)
ReplyDeletejyothisdayout, I am so pleased you enjoyed it. Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments! ♥
DeleteOh, no!!! Gave me shivers! :)
ReplyDeleteMartha, well that was the effect I was going for so YAY! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteNice, short & scary!
ReplyDeleteRenuka, I am so pleased you enjoyed it! Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments! ♥
DeleteGosh, so scary and obssessive. Well done, Kathy in 55 words:)
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Ranveer, yes! There are some sick folks out in this world! Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments! ♥
Deletewoaa that's intense. Nice 55'er
ReplyDeleteRajlakshmi, I am so pleased you liked it!! Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments! ♥
DeleteThe obsessed lover kills then. Wish there were no such jealousy & violence in our world....
ReplyDeleteAnita, the world would be such a better place if there wasn't! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteScary! Coming to think of it, life seems so fickle doesn't it? You have a way with words :)
ReplyDeleteMagic Quill, I am so pleased you like it. Thank you so much for stopping in and for your kind comments. They made my day!!! ♥
DeleteEEEEK! Poor Kara! Good use of the prompt as you told a complete story in that short count. Well done!
ReplyDeleteWritercat59, I am so pleased you enjoyed it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
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