Fate had stepped in and brought you to me.
We fell in love.
My best friend, we vowed to be one for all
time.
This was written for the Trifextra writing prompt #100. They challenged me to write a 33-word response to the following snippet:
The first time I saw. . .
Here's the catch: all of the 33 words must be one syllable each.
To clarify, we were given 5 words and asked to add another 33, for a grand total of 38.
To clarify, we were given 5 words and asked to add another 33, for a grand total of 38.
This is very cute!
ReplyDeleteMaggie, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteThat was beautifully written. Kathy, you should make your husband a card with that verse in it.
ReplyDeleteJoJo, that is so sweet of you to say! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteVery nicely done!
ReplyDeleteJoseph, I am so happy you liked it! Thank you so much for stopping by and for your lovely comments! ♥
DeleteWOW! That was a tough one. You tackled it very well. :)
ReplyDeletejyothisdayout.com, yes it sure was!! I agonized about this one forever, posted it, then agonized about it more. I am so glad you liked what I came up with. This one I was sure was a fail, but maybe it wasn't as bad as I made it out to be. Thank you so much for your sweet comments. Comments really do dig a person out of their pit of despair and see their work in a different light! ♥
DeleteAww...that was so sweet! Lovely pic if the two if u :)
ReplyDeleteAditi, aww thank you! I like this picture too. It seems like it has been such a long time ago!! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteSimply beautiful!! Agree with JoJo! :)
ReplyDeleteShilpa, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteThats sweet
ReplyDeleteGod bless Kathy !
good to come across ur blog after long :)
hv a good time
Afshan, I am so pleased you liked it. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments. Hope you will wander my way again! ♥
DeleteAnother sweet one. So amazing in its simplicity.
ReplyDeleteObsessivemom, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
Deletebeautifully written in 38 words. Very sweet. I have sent you a message on FB. Do check your "others" folder.
ReplyDeletesugandha, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your lovely comments. I have messaged you back ♥
DeleteKalpana, I am so happy you liked it. Thank you for stopping in and for your sweet comments! ♥
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ReplyDeleteKathy so beautiful! And how pretty you look in that *god bless you always* <3
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Richa, you made me smile so big!! Thank you! You are too kind Richa. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteI like this! Great photo, too.
ReplyDeleteI couldn't write about my husband. The first time I saw him, I had a boyfriend... oh, and he was my boss. Too much mess for 38 one-syllable words, haha :)
jannatwrites, that would be hard to cram into 38 one syllable words but I bet you could do it!! You are an amazing writer! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteThat sounds challenging Kathy. But you did an excellent job. Really enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteKalpanaa, I am so pleased you liked it! It was the hardest challenge I have attempted yet and was convinced it was the worst thing I had ever wrote! LOL Thank you so much for stopping by to read and for your sweet comments which went a long way in restoring my faith in my writing abilities. ♥
DeleteA challenge well done. :)
ReplyDeleteshilpasharmaonline, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteAshwini, it was a tough prompt! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! I loved that dress and it still hangs in my closet! ♥
ReplyDeleteWonderful piece.
ReplyDeleteLauren, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteYour husband is a lucky man to have you as his wife. We are lucky readers to have you for a writer. :)
ReplyDeleteTom, wow! Thank you for the kind words. I hope HE knows how lucky he is! LOLOLOLOLOLOL I am sure there are days he is wondering WHY!!! I am lucky that you stopped by and made me smile. Thank you so much! ♥ ♥
DeleteThat's so sweet. And very well done for the prompt.
ReplyDeleteSuzy, thank you! I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteSo sweet.
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DeleteAw, sweet:)
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