Monday, January 6, 2014

My Little Sister

I don't have a little sister so this 100 word story written for "Write Tribe's 100 words on Saturday" is purely fictional.  


100 Words on Saturday - Write Tribe



    She threw a “know it all” look at me before smiling angelically and begging for some candy.   Daddy picked her up and showered her with kisses as I watched.  Then he did the unthinkable.  He gave HER the candy he had denied ME only moments before.







    “Rot my teeth!  Spoil my supper!” he had said.  With tears threatening, I glared at her before I fled to my room prepared to hate her forever.  How could he be so cruel? 






                    
      Moments later she raced into my room, bounced onto my bed, and unloaded all the sweets before me.  

      "Let’s share sissy!"



46 comments:

  1. Wow! Tears stung my eyes when I read the end! Maybe because I am the little sister. Thanks for the story!

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    1. Kristin, I am so pleased you liked it. Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments! ♥

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  4. That's what little sisters are for, sharing happiness, love and laughter whenever they can.

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    1. Mahabore, I have a bigger sister and we have never had a good relationship. I would have loved to have had that, but finally had to accept that it would never be. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments. ♥

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  5. Aw, Kathy, this is so sweet! Love the twist of the little sis sharing. :) I never had a sister, either, and always wished I had.
    Blessings!

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    1. Martha, I am so pleased you enjoyed it. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments!♥

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  6. Even I don't have a sister, so my younger brother filled that space...
    A lovely story! Enjoyed reading it...


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  7. Awww...how very sweet. Love is priceless, especially with a sibling its always a treasure. Nice.

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    1. myriadrainbowhues, I am so happy you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  8. Ohh that was such a gr8 ending...just the perfect way to describe how little sisters are :)

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    1. Nabanita, I am so glad you liked it! Thank you for stopping in and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  9. sweet story with so many emotions..Loved the ending.. :)

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    1. payal agarwal, I am so pleased you enjoyed it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  10. Kathy this was wonderful...I could so relate to it and see my own sis in that Lil one!

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  11. What a cute story Kathy. And what a smart little sis she is.

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  12. Aw, though fictional, it was utterly cute :D

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    1. Aayesha, I am so happy you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your lovely comments! ♥

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  13. I'm speechless and feel pity at such father but a sister with a heart of gold:)
    Well done, Kathy

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    1. vishalbheero, you would be surprised! I am so happy you liked my little story and for your sweet comments. ♥

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  14. Great little made up sissy to share

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    1. Patt, I am so pleased you enjoyed it. Thank you for stopping in and for your comments! ♥

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  15. Aww!! That's so sweet! Loved this story, Kathy :)

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    1. Shilpa, I am so happy you liked it! ♥ Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  16. That's what sisters do. They fight for the silliest of things. But when it comes to standing up for them or sharing with them, they're the best :-)

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    1. Ashwini, and that is exactly what I wanted to show in this story. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  17. Lovely story there Kathy, incorporating the sibling aspect really well!

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    1. iwrotethose, I am so happy you liked it. Thank you for stopping in and for your sweet comments!♥

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  18. Well that are sisters for you :-) always and forever <3

    Richa

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    1. Richa, it would be nice to have one like that. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  19. "Sweet" ending :) I don't have a sister, so I didn't really experience sibling jealousy (it helped that my brother was ALWAYS in trouble!)

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    1. jannatwrites, I have a sister but it is a lot like not having one. We are not close and do not speak. Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments! ♥

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  20. So sweet that was! I have a little sister and I must confess that she is one of the best things that have happened to me so far. :-) God Bless you! :-)

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    1. Rekha, I would have liked to have had a sister that didn't hate my guts. Unfortunately that wasn't to be. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  21. Such a sweet story Kathy! Mine won't share, the elder one would definitely share though. But I love them both. :D

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  22. That was the sweetest ever... And to have done it in 100 words is super.

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