It had been
the best 4 years of Brianna’s life, no doubt.
She loved Dillon. If Dillon loved
her, he would marry her. All their
friends were married.
Either a diamond on her finger or she would
kick him to the curb…that was the deal.
Shit or get off the pot!
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Indeed an ultimatum !!! Direct and to the point.
ReplyDeleteJayanta, yep! thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments! ♥
DeleteLike they say either in or out....Good one Kathy :)
ReplyDeleteU for Uncanny-Random Thoughts Naba
Nabanita, pretty straight forward and simple. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteThat's telling him! :)
ReplyDeleteMartha, and he needed telling! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteYea Brainee, U tell him!
ReplyDeleteMina, I am so pleased you enjoyed it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteKathy this is a nice little story, with a great message.
ReplyDeleteUsha, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
Deletehaha, in a way ultimatums are a good way to really sort out what is going to be or not be!
ReplyDeleteTrisha, it is certainly better than being strung along. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
Deleteouch :) Good for her. He better commit...
ReplyDeletesulekkha, and if he doesn't she will always know! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
Deletehe better be careful with his choice :)
ReplyDeleteRajlakshmi, at least she will finally know exactly what his intentions are! Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments! ♥
DeleteShit or get off the pot! Love it, Kathy:)
ReplyDeletevishalbheeroo, HA HA HA HA HA HA! I am so happy you liked it! Thank you for stopping by to read and for your sweet comments and for the case of the giggles you supplied!♥
DeleteBrianna is clear about what she wants - I love it :)
ReplyDeleteAfshan, I think she is tired of waiting and fed up. LOL Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments! ♥
DeleteI like her clarity of thought!! :D
ReplyDeleteGood one, Kathy!! :) ♥
Shilpa, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteIt seems if it comes down to an ultimatum, then there's already been a decision in my mind. No drama, bye-bye! HA!
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Donna, I agree. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteWhat if the pot won't flush?
ReplyDeletePat, well in that case, the pot will overflow and the shit will get all over!! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteUltimatum is right! Ha, yeah, I'd say if he likes it, then he should put a ring on it. :)
ReplyDeleteLoni, HA HA HA! Most definitely! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteHahaha! I always felt like a guy should be decisive if he has any prayer of succeeding in this life, and I wanted a guy who was going to succeed. Mine is quite decisive.
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Crystal, well you can't have them stringing you along forever. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteLoved Brianna'a attitude, it is next to impossible to get a guy to commit to anything without ultimatums. Nicely done Kathy!!
ReplyDeleteReshma, I guess you have to find the right guy. It only took my husband 3 months to put a diamond on my finger. I am so pleased you enjoyed my story. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteIt was all romantic and then.....POW!!! Is the "S" word allowed on the A-to-Z Challenge?! Oh my!!!! :)
ReplyDeleteTom, all is fair in love and war...and the A-Z challenge! HA HA HA Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteSometimes an ultimatum is called for. Moving forward beats standing still or going backward.
ReplyDeleteGreat post for the AtoZ Challenge. I linked to your participation on my post for 'U' - Unplug, Unwind or Unhinged.
Deena, I agree. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! I am so pleased you enjoyed my story and am very grateful you linked to me. Thank you ! ♥
Deletego brianna go! tel him!! good one kathy :-)
ReplyDeleteSwathi, I am so pleased you enjoyed it. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteLove it! I'd be issuing an ultimatum too!
ReplyDeleteJoJo, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteNow that is an ultimatum! Made me chuckle.
ReplyDeleteSuzy, I am so pleased you got a bit of a giggle out of this! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteSuzy said exactly what i wanted to say :) Quite an ultimatum she has given him now.
ReplyDeleteBeloo, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteWell, it's decision time for him!
ReplyDeletejannatwrites, yes it is! I am so pleased you enjoyed my story. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteNice. Really neat idea for the A to Z--your micro fiction really does tell a story in a few sentences. Great job. ;-)
ReplyDeleteTeresa, I am so pleased you liked it. This has been a different A-Z for me this year mixing it up with my art, 55 fiction, and haiku. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
Deletenice little story..enjoyed reading it. :)
ReplyDeletepayal, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
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