Thursday, April 24, 2014

U is for Ultimatum







      It had been the best 4 years of Brianna’s life, no doubt.   She loved Dillon.  If Dillon loved her, he would marry her.  All their friends were married. 

     



        Either a diamond on her finger or she would kick him to the curb…that was the deal.  Shit or get off the pot!












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  1. Indeed an ultimatum !!! Direct and to the point.

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    1. Jayanta, yep! thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments! ♥

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    1. Nabanita, pretty straight forward and simple. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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    1. Martha, and he needed telling! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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    1. Mina, I am so pleased you enjoyed it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  5. Kathy this is a nice little story, with a great message.

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    1. Usha, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  6. haha, in a way ultimatums are a good way to really sort out what is going to be or not be!

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    1. Trisha, it is certainly better than being strung along. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  7. ouch :) Good for her. He better commit...

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    1. sulekkha, and if he doesn't she will always know! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  8. he better be careful with his choice :)

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    1. Rajlakshmi, at least she will finally know exactly what his intentions are! Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments! ♥

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  9. Shit or get off the pot! Love it, Kathy:)

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    1. vishalbheeroo, HA HA HA HA HA HA! I am so happy you liked it! Thank you for stopping by to read and for your sweet comments and for the case of the giggles you supplied!♥

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  10. Brianna is clear about what she wants - I love it :)

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    1. Afshan, I think she is tired of waiting and fed up. LOL Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments! ♥

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  11. I like her clarity of thought!! :D
    Good one, Kathy!! :) ♥

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    1. Shilpa, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  12. It seems if it comes down to an ultimatum, then there's already been a decision in my mind. No drama, bye-bye! HA!
    Donna Smith
    The A-to-Z Challenge
    Mainely Write

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    1. Donna, I agree. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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    1. Pat, well in that case, the pot will overflow and the shit will get all over!! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  14. Ultimatum is right! Ha, yeah, I'd say if he likes it, then he should put a ring on it. :)

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    1. Loni, HA HA HA! Most definitely! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  15. Hahaha! I always felt like a guy should be decisive if he has any prayer of succeeding in this life, and I wanted a guy who was going to succeed. Mine is quite decisive.

    True Heroes from A to Z

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    1. Crystal, well you can't have them stringing you along forever. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  16. Loved Brianna'a attitude, it is next to impossible to get a guy to commit to anything without ultimatums. Nicely done Kathy!!

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    1. Reshma, I guess you have to find the right guy. It only took my husband 3 months to put a diamond on my finger. I am so pleased you enjoyed my story. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  17. It was all romantic and then.....POW!!! Is the "S" word allowed on the A-to-Z Challenge?! Oh my!!!! :)

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    1. Tom, all is fair in love and war...and the A-Z challenge! HA HA HA Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  18. Sometimes an ultimatum is called for. Moving forward beats standing still or going backward.

    Great post for the AtoZ Challenge. I linked to your participation on my post for 'U' - Unplug, Unwind or Unhinged.

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    1. Deena, I agree. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! I am so pleased you enjoyed my story and am very grateful you linked to me. Thank you ! ♥

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  19. go brianna go! tel him!! good one kathy :-)

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    1. Swathi, I am so pleased you enjoyed it. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  20. Love it! I'd be issuing an ultimatum too!

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    1. JoJo, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  21. Now that is an ultimatum! Made me chuckle.

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    1. Suzy, I am so pleased you got a bit of a giggle out of this! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  22. Suzy said exactly what i wanted to say :) Quite an ultimatum she has given him now.

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    1. Beloo, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  23. Well, it's decision time for him!

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    1. jannatwrites, yes it is! I am so pleased you enjoyed my story. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  24. Nice. Really neat idea for the A to Z--your micro fiction really does tell a story in a few sentences. Great job. ;-)

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    1. Teresa, I am so pleased you liked it. This has been a different A-Z for me this year mixing it up with my art, 55 fiction, and haiku. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  25. nice little story..enjoyed reading it. :)

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    1. payal, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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