Charlie eyed
all nurses suspiciously. Everyone thought
he talked crazy. That is why his kids forced him into assisted
living, to have him watched. He’d
escape to the beach nearby. Like before,
she would rejuvenate him: another modern medical miracle. Goodbye cancer!
Ah but them mermaids be fickle beasts! Lol
ReplyDeleteLet's hope she will...
Joe, you never can tell about those mermaids! HA! Thank you for stopping by and for your comments! ♥
DeleteSo mermaids are real, who knew? lol
ReplyDeletePat, all you have to do is believe...kind of like with Santa Claus! LOL Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteQuite imaginative :) But wouldn't it be nice if this could really happen. So many people in the world could be cured by this miracle!
ReplyDeleteBeloo, I think it would be great. Think how many people would live longer lives!! Wishful thinking, but it would be so great. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! I am so pleased you enjoyed my little story. ♥
DeleteThe sea is miraculous for sure...I love thinking of him hearing the siren's song and it leading him to the beach and remission.
ReplyDeleteKir, it is a lovely thought! If only! Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteWow! What a miracle, Kathy!
ReplyDeleteBut, many people don't believe in miracles, hence they think believers are crazy...
Anita, I think people are crazy not to believe! Everyone should open their minds to the concept to all things are possible. It makes life such a grander adventure. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteGood to be able to elude those suspicious nurses so that the real healing can occur. Nicely done Kathy.
ReplyDeletetbkerr, they are sure to throw a monkey wrench into the best of plans! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! I am so pleased you enjoyed my story. ♥
DeleteThe beach cures everything. ;)
ReplyDeleteJoJo, I agree! I want to go back so bad!! Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteThat would certainly be nice. Beaches could replace hospitals!
ReplyDeleteStephanie, wouldn't that be awesome??? I would be so into it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteAlternate treatment is something that works for who has faith in it... Hope Goodbye cancer is a truth for Charlie. Nice one.
ReplyDeleteJayanta, I am so pleased you enjoyed it! Sure would be better than the traditional treatment for cancer. :D Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteI like how you can interpret "she," the one that rejuvenates, in multiple ways.
ReplyDeletecynk, I am so pleased you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteAaaww, hope he can say Goodbye for sure... Very touching tale, dear Kathy:-)
ReplyDeleteEli, I am so happy you liked it. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments!♥
DeleteYay, Charlie! Great shorthand story.
ReplyDeleteJennifer, I am so pleased you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteVery nice!
ReplyDeleteCindy, I am so pleased you enjoyed it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteI would much rather be at the beach than the hospital!
ReplyDeleteLaurel, me too! Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments! ♥
DeleteThis was so good...I've only been over at your site a couple of times and each time has me leaving smiling and happy. You have a real gift, Kathy :-)
ReplyDeletehummingbirdinhiding, comments like yours keep me writing even when I am sure I should just hang it up. Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments and encouragement. I truly appreciate it! ♥
DeleteIf only!
ReplyDeletemutterschwester, if only it could be that easy to restore health. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteI liked your take, and I wish such things could happen in real life...:)
ReplyDeleteshellymona, I am so pleased you liked it. If only, my mom and others like her would still be here with us. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteI like the positivism that you spread through this, Kathy :)
ReplyDeleteSoumyaa, I am so pleased you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for dropping in and for your encouraging comments! ♥
DeleteYou had me from 'elixir'--such a perfect word choice as part of the title for this piece.
ReplyDeleteC.C. I am so pleased you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteSuch a generous, hopeful message, Kathy. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteMeg, I am so pleased you liked it. I can be such an optimistic soul. Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
Deletesuch a nice take...nature can heal ailment, mental and physical :)
ReplyDeleteAnkita, in a way it would be like nature and fate balancing. I am so pleased you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteThe beach is always healing for me, Cathy. I'm sure it will work its magic on him! :)
ReplyDeleteCorinne, for me too although I don't get there as often as I like! I love the water and the sand. Just love it! Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteNice! I think we all have somewhere that restores us. (For me, it happens to be in the mountains, perhaps by a stream or river... I have this thing about beach sand {shivers} can't stand it my feet :) )
ReplyDeletejannatwrites, if I lived closer to the mountains I think I could find peace there. As it is, I love the water. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteNature is the best medicine ... well written :-)
ReplyDeleteAmrit, I agree! Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteNicely done! Great take on the prompt. :-)!
ReplyDeletethewizardsword.com. I am so happy you liked it! Thank you so much for your kind comments and for stopping by! ♥
DeleteThe beach is definitely the place to go! The ocean as great cure all : )
ReplyDeletekymm, I agree completely!! Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteIt would be wonderful if it was true :) Wonderful story.
ReplyDeleteRajlakshmi, it surely would. Thank you so much for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥
DeleteJo-Anne, I think it would be quite extraordinary! Thank you so much for stopping by and for your kind encouraging words. I am so pleased you enjoyed my little story. ♥
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