Friday, January 17, 2014

Little Did She Know

55 on Friday #WriteTribe



      Kara walked daily often talking to him on her cell as she wandered the deserted park’s path.  How dare she talk to him when he loved her so! 


      She ended the call, stopping to gaze at the river.   He added the silencer to the gun.  If he couldn’t have her, no one else would either.












36 comments:

  1. Aah! The violent obsessed lover boy!! :|

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    1. Shilpa, ah yes! A real obsessed nut job for today! Thank you for stopping by. I am so pleased you enjoyed my little story! ♥

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  2. Oh my God! It's scary! :( well written..

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    1. payal, happy to scare your pants off! Thank you for stopping by and for the sweet comments! ♥

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  3. Short and to the point! :) I enjoyed that and also like the new look of your site, Kathy. Have a good weekend.

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    1. Debbie, I am so pleased you liked my story! I am currently in the process of revamping and doing a redesign of my site. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  4. Ah! scary! But such a nice point of view for the prompt.

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    1. myriadrainbowhues, I am so pleased you liked it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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    1. Kalpana, no it isn't but it happens. Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments. ♥

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  6. that is cruel and ill minded...well written

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    1. Karan, I am so pleased you enjoyed it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  7. That's quite an unhealthy obsession there. Very well written Kathy :)

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    1. iwrotethose, I am so pleased you enjoyed it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  8. oh my that's so tragic n obsessive !!

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    1. Nabanita, I am so pleased you liked it. Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments! ♥

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  9. Oh dear - tragic and scary that people can do that. Very well written and thank goodness it's fiction.

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    1. Suzy, there are people in this world that are not at all mentally stable. Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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    1. JoJo, so pleased you enjoyed it and found it chilling. Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments! ♥

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  11. Oh God! A jealous stalker! Yikes! Nicely done Kathy. :)

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    1. jyothisdayout, I am so pleased you enjoyed it. Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments! ♥

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    1. Martha, well that was the effect I was going for so YAY! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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    1. Renuka, I am so pleased you enjoyed it! Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments! ♥

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  14. Gosh, so scary and obssessive. Well done, Kathy in 55 words:)
    http://vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com/2014/01/17/55-on-friday-little-did-she-know

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    1. Ranveer, yes! There are some sick folks out in this world! Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments! ♥

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    1. Rajlakshmi, I am so pleased you liked it!! Thank you for stopping by and for your kind comments! ♥

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  16. The obsessed lover kills then. Wish there were no such jealousy & violence in our world....

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    1. Anita, the world would be such a better place if there wasn't! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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  17. Scary! Coming to think of it, life seems so fickle doesn't it? You have a way with words :)

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    1. Magic Quill, I am so pleased you like it. Thank you so much for stopping in and for your kind comments. They made my day!!! ♥

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  18. EEEEK! Poor Kara! Good use of the prompt as you told a complete story in that short count. Well done!

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    1. Writercat59, I am so pleased you enjoyed it! Thank you for stopping by and for your sweet comments! ♥

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